Kidnapped!

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Copyright – Douglas M. MacIlroy

100 words:

The odd things at Bernie’s grandmother’s house fascinated Joey. It surprised him how well the old helmet fit. “Does he have it on?” Joey barely heard the question through the thick metal. Turning around he jumped back. Standing in the doorway were Bernie and Mona in spacesuits!

Joey fumbled with the helmet, trying to take it off. “I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” said Mona pointing at the window. Looking through the glass, he saw the houses around them falling away. “You’d best get this on,” she said, holding out a suit. Bernie smiled as Joey began screaming.

 

 

 

 

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36 thoughts on “Kidnapped!

  1. Hmm, it sounds like Bernie and Mona are mysteriously tied to this whole ordeal…Could they be aliens or perhaps, part of a select few who know the fate of the world? I greatly enjoyed the combination of mystery, suspense, and adventure in this story!

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